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Question 3 is worth 25 marks - the biggest single mark chunk in Paper 1. Fifteen marks are for reading (the points you find) and ten are for writing (how concisely and clearly you express them).
One mark per relevant idea identified from Texts A and C. Top candidates identify around 15 distinct points.
Level 5 (9-10 marks): concise, fluent, cohesive, consistently in your own words. No lifting.
Imagine the question asks for the dangers faced by city cyclists. Here is an opening that covers six points in about 70 words:
City cyclists face busy roads where lorries and buses struggle to see them, especially at junctions. Poorly maintained cycle lanes leave riders vulnerable to potholes and sudden diversions. Motor traffic produces pollution that harms riders' lungs over time. Drivers who are distracted or impatient increase the risk of collisions, and inadequate lighting after dark makes cyclists harder to spot.
Notice: no quotation, no opinion, every sentence a new point, and the phrasing is the student's own.