Part (a): Questions 1(a) to 7(a)
Extract analysis
What it asks
Analyse how the writer presents a character, a setting or an event in the printed extract, using examples from it.
What earns marks
- Close analysis of the writer's language in the extract: word choices, imagery, dialogue and sentence forms.
- Form and structure too: the narrative voice, how the extract builds or changes direction, and how it ends.
- Short quotations from the extract, each with its effect on the reader explained.
- Accurate subject terms used to develop points.
What each level looks like
Top level first.
| Level | Marks | What an answer at this level does |
|---|---|---|
| Level 5 | 17-20 | Weighs up how the language, form and structure combine to shape the reader's response, with exact subject terms built naturally into the argument. |
| Level 4 | 13-16 | Every paragraph digs into how the language, form and structure work and what they do to the reader, in close detail, with subject terms used accurately to push ideas further. |
| Level 3 | 9-12 | Shows how several of the writer's methods work and what each does to the reader, with relevant subject terms. |
| Level 2 | 5-8 | Mostly describes what happens in the extract, but makes some comments on how it is written, using a few subject terms. |
| Level 1 | 1-4 | Says very little about how the extract is written: a feature or two may be named, with almost no explanation and few subject terms. |
What to avoid
- Adding context: it is not marked anywhere in Section A of this paper.
- Bringing in other chapters: part (a) is about the extract.
- Retelling the extract instead of analysing it.
Tip: Pick out four or five key moments in the extract and, for each, say what the writer does and what it makes the reader think or feel.
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