First question on your play (1.1 to 6.1)
Shakespeare extract
What it asks
Read the printed extract and answer the question on it, for example what the characters say and do there and how an audience might react.
What earns marks
- A clear focus on the question, kept up to the end.
- Close reference to the extract, with short quotations from across it.
- Analysis of Shakespeare’s language and dramatic methods (for example imagery, verse or prose, stage directions) and their effect on an audience, with subject terms used accurately where they help.
- One mark out of 15 for the whole answer: your understanding (AO1) and your analysis (AO2) are judged together on one grid and count equally.
What each level looks like
Top level first.
| Level | Marks | What an answer at this level does |
|---|---|---|
| Band 5 | 13-15 | Insightful from start to finish: it sees how the extract fits the play, uses exactly the right quotations and weighs how language, form and structure shape meaning. |
| Band 4 | 10-12 | Stays on the question throughout, with a confident grasp of the extract, good quotations and analysis of language that keeps getting deeper. |
| Band 3 | 7-9 | Sticks to the question and understands the extract, with suitable quotations and the first real analysis of language and its effects. |
| Band 2 | 4-6 | Partly answers the question and shows some understanding, with a few quotations and brief remarks on the language. |
| Band 1 | 1-3 | Says a few basic things about the extract, with loose references and vague comments on language; terms may be wrong. |
What to avoid
- Retelling the scene instead of analysing it.
- Writing about events elsewhere in the play: a sentence placing the extract is enough.
- Spending time on context: it is not assessed here, so it helps only where it explains the extract.
- Answering on more than one play.
Tip: Work through the extract in order, choosing three or four moments, and for each say what it shows and how Shakespeare’s words create the effect.
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