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Hamlet
by William Shakespeare - c. 1599–1601
Shakespeare’s longest and most philosophically searching tragedy, Hamlet follows a young prince of Denmark commanded by his father’s ghost to avenge a secret murder. Written around 1599–1601, at the turn of a new century and the end of the Elizabethan age, the play takes the conventions of the revenge tragedy and turns them inwards, producing a protagonist who cannot simply act. Hamlet delays, philosophises, stages a play, feigns madness, and agonises over the meaning of existence itself. The play explores the collapse of a court corrupted from within, the unstable boundary between performance and truth, and the tension between moral thought and violent action. Its central soliloquies — including "To be, or not to be" — have become defining statements of existential crisis in Western literature. Hamlet is set by Edexcel, OCR and Eduqas at A-level and by Pearson’s International A-level, though not by AQA’s Literature A (7712), and remains Shakespeare’s most quoted and most debated play.
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“In the same figure, like the King that’s dead.”
Moment 1 of 21 · Act 1, Scene 1
The Ghost on the battlements
Setting: The castle platform at Elsinore, at midnight, bitterly coldTension
At midnight the sentries Barnardo and Marcellus bring the sceptical scholar Horatio to see an apparition. It appears twice, in armour and looking like the dead King, but will not speak. Horatio explains that Denmark is arming against young Fortinbras of Norway, and they decide to tell Prince Hamlet.
“In the same figure, like the King that’s dead.”
Who
BBarnardo
FFrancisco
MMarcellus
HHoratio
GThe Ghost
Why it matters
The play opens on fear, uncertainty and a threat from abroad, and the dead refuse to stay buried.
Death and mortalityCorruption and decayAppearance vs reality
Act 1, Scene 1: The Ghost on the battlements. At midnight the sentries Barnardo and Marcellus bring the sceptical scholar Horatio to see an apparition. It appears twice, in armour and looking like the dead King, but will not speak. Horatio explains that Denmark is arming against young Fortinbras of Norway, and they decide to tell Prince Hamlet. "In the same figure, like the King that’s dead." The play opens on fear, uncertainty and a threat from abroad, and the dead refuse to stay buried.
Act 1, Scene 2: The new King and the mourning son. Claudius, now King and married to his brother's widow Gertrude, deals smoothly with Norway and lets Laertes return to France. He and Gertrude urge Hamlet to stop mourning and refuse to let him go back to Wittenberg. Alone, Hamlet wishes he could die; then Horatio tells him of the Ghost. "Seems, madam! Nay, it is; I know not seems." The public court and the private grief are set side by side, and Hamlet claims to be the only one not acting.
Act 1, Scene 3: Ophelia is warned. Before leaving for France, Laertes warns his sister Ophelia that Hamlet cannot freely choose a wife. Polonius gives Laertes a string of precepts, then questions Ophelia and orders her to stop speaking with Hamlet altogether. "I shall obey, my lord." Ophelia's love is placed under her father's control, and her obedience sets up her later breakdown.
Act 1, Scene 4: Hamlet follows the Ghost. On the platform Hamlet hears the King's noisy drinking and condemns it. The Ghost beckons him away; Horatio fears it may lure him to madness, but Hamlet breaks free of his friends and follows. "Something is rotten in the state of Denmark." Hamlet commits himself to the Ghost against the warnings of reason.
Act 1, Scene 5: The Ghost's command. The Ghost says he is suffering in fires for his sins, that Claudius seduced his queen with his wit and gifts, and that Claudius murdered him by pouring poison into his ear as he slept. He commands revenge but tells Hamlet to leave Gertrude to heaven. Hamlet swears his friends to secrecy and warns them he may pretend to be mad. "Adieu, adieu, adieu. Remember me." The revenge plot is set in motion, and so is the antic disposition that will cover it.
Act 2, Scene 1: Ophelia's fright. Polonius sends his servant Reynaldo to spy on Laertes in Paris. Ophelia rushes in: Hamlet has come to her room half-dressed, stared at her face in silence and left. Polonius decides that her rejection has driven him mad with love. "This is the very ecstasy of love" The first sign of the antic disposition is seen only through Ophelia's report, so the audience cannot tell whether it is real.
Act 2, Scene 2: Spies and players. Claudius and Gertrude recruit Hamlet's old schoolfellows Rosencrantz and Guildenstern to find out what troubles him. Polonius reads Hamlet's love letter to the King and plans to watch Hamlet with Ophelia. Hamlet baits Polonius, makes his friends admit they were sent for, and welcomes a company of travelling players. "I am but mad north-north-west." Everyone is now watching Hamlet, and Hamlet knows it.
Act 2, Scene 2: The rogue and peasant slave. Moved by the Player's speech about Hecuba, Hamlet is left alone and attacks himself for doing nothing when an actor can weep for a fiction. He decides the Ghost might be a devil and plans to have the players act a murder like his father's before Claudius. "The spirit that I have seen / May be the devil" Doubt about the Ghost gives Hamlet a reason to test before he acts.
Act 3, Scene 1: “To be, or not to be” and the nunnery scene. While Claudius and Polonius hide, Hamlet speaks his most famous soliloquy, then meets Ophelia, tells her he loved her once and then that he did not, and orders her to a nunnery. Claudius, unconvinced it is love-madness, decides to send Hamlet to England. "O, what a noble mind is here o’erthrown!" Ophelia is used as bait and broken by it, and the King begins to plan against Hamlet.
Act 3, Scene 2: The Mousetrap. Hamlet instructs the players and asks Horatio to watch the King. A dumb show and then the play itself show a king poisoned as he sleeps in his garden, in the play by his nephew. Claudius rises, calls for light and leaves; Hamlet is sure the Ghost told the truth, and goes to his mother. "What, frighted with false fire?" Close to the middle of the play: guilt is exposed, and from here Claudius is on the attack.
Act 3, Scene 3: The King at prayer. Claudius orders Rosencrantz and Guildenstern to take Hamlet to England. Alone, he confesses his brother's murder and tries to pray. Hamlet comes upon him kneeling but will not kill him at prayer, in case his soul goes to heaven, and leaves. Claudius rises: his prayer was empty. "My words fly up, my thoughts remain below." The clearest chance for revenge is refused, for a reason that rests on a false appearance.
Act 3, Scene 4: The closet scene. Polonius hides behind the arras in Gertrude's room. When she cries for help and a voice behind it cries out too, Hamlet stabs through it, hoping it is the King, and kills Polonius. He condemns her marriage until the Ghost appears, seen only by him, to sharpen his purpose. Gertrude promises to keep his secret. "Thou wretched, rash, intruding fool, farewell!" The rash killing of the wrong man sets off every death that follows.
Act 4, Scene 3: Sent to England. Hamlet, who has hidden the body, mocks the King, saying Polonius is at supper where worms are eating him. Claudius sends him to England at once, and alone reveals that his sealed letters order the King of England to put Hamlet to death. "The present death of Hamlet. Do it, England" Claudius now openly plots murder, and the audience knows what Hamlet carries.
Act 4, Scene 4: Fortinbras's army. On the way to the ship Hamlet meets the army of Fortinbras, marching to fight Poland for a worthless patch of ground. Alone, he compares himself with men who die for a straw and vows that his thoughts will now be bloody. This soliloquy appears only in the Second Quarto. "My thoughts be bloody or be nothing worth." The last soliloquy: Hamlet leaves Denmark promising bloodshed and is absent for the rest of Act 4.
Act 4, Scene 5: Ophelia mad, Laertes in arms. Ophelia, driven mad by her father's death, sings fragments of songs before the King and Queen. Laertes breaks in at the head of a crowd demanding revenge; Claudius calms him. Ophelia returns and hands out flowers, and Laertes agrees to hear the King's account of his father's death. "There’s rosemary, that’s for remembrance" Real madness appears beside the feigned kind, and a second avenger arrives who does not delay.
Act 4, Scene 7: The plot, and a drowning. Horatio has learned from a letter that Hamlet escaped on a pirate ship; now a letter tells Claudius that Hamlet is back in Denmark, alone. Claudius and Laertes plan a fencing match with an unblunted sword, which Laertes will poison, and a poisoned cup in reserve. Gertrude brings word that Ophelia has drowned. "To cut his throat i’ th’ church." Laertes would kill Hamlet even in a church, where Hamlet would not kill a man at prayer, and Claudius turns grief into a weapon.
Act 5, Scene 1: The graveyard. Two gravediggers joke about whether a suicide should have Christian burial. Hamlet and Horatio arrive; Hamlet talks with the Gravedigger, who turns up the skull of Yorick, the King's jester when Hamlet was a child, and Hamlet reflects that even Alexander the Great turned to dust. "Alas, poor Yorick." Before the violence of the ending, the play looks death in the face and finds a joke and a skull.
Act 5, Scene 1: Ophelia's funeral. Ophelia's coffin arrives with reduced rites because her death was doubtful. Laertes leaps into the grave; Hamlet comes forward, declares himself and leaps in after him, and the two grapple until they are pulled apart. "This is I, / Hamlet the Dane." Hamlet reclaims his royal name over the grave of the woman he rejected.
Act 5, Scene 2: The readiness is all. Hamlet tells Horatio how he found the order for his death and forged a new one condemning Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. The courtier Osric brings the King's wager on a fencing match with Laertes. Hamlet admits a misgiving but accepts, trusting in providence. "The readiness is all." A calmer Hamlet goes to his death having stopped trying to control events.
Act 5, Scene 2: The duel. Gertrude drinks from the poisoned cup against Claudius's order. Laertes wounds Hamlet with the poisoned blade; in a scuffle they exchange swords and Hamlet wounds Laertes. The Queen dies, Laertes confesses the plot, and Hamlet kills Claudius with the sword and the poison. "I am justly kill’d with mine own treachery." The revenge is finally done, in public, by means Claudius himself prepared.
Act 5, Scene 2: The rest is silence. Laertes and Hamlet exchange forgiveness before Laertes dies. Hamlet stops Horatio from drinking the poison so that he can live to tell the story, names Fortinbras as the next King, and dies. Fortinbras arrives, claims the throne and orders a soldier's funeral for Hamlet. "Absent thee from felicity awhile" The royal line of Denmark ends, and a foreign prince whose father lost lands to old Hamlet inherits the whole kingdom.
Character map
Select a person to see their relationships. Rings mark who is in the moment above.
Hamlet · son and father · The Ghost
The Ghost commands revenge and memory, and Hamlet vows to wipe everything else from his mind. Doubt about whether the Ghost is honest or a devil shapes the first half of the play.
Hamlet · nephew and uncle, now stepson and stepfather · Claudius
Claudius calls Hamlet his son in public and plans his death in private; Hamlet mocks him, tests him and finally kills him. The two circle each other for the whole play.
Hamlet · son and mother · Gertrude
Hamlet is disgusted by her remarriage and confronts her in the closet scene. She keeps his secret afterwards, and her dying words warn him about the drink.
Claudius · husband and wife, once brother-in-law and sister-in-law · Gertrude
By Hamlet's account Claudius married his brother's widow within a month of the funeral. He later tells Laertes she is so bound to his life that he could not act against her son openly. She drinks the poison he prepared.
Claudius · murderer and murdered brother · The Ghost
Claudius poisoned his brother to take his crown and queen. His own soliloquy calls it “A brother’s murder!”, the oldest crime of all.
Hamlet · former lovers · Ophelia
Their courtship is ended by her father's order. Hamlet treats her cruelly in the nunnery scene and the Mousetrap scene, kills her father, and claims at her grave that he loved her more than forty thousand brothers.
Polonius · father and daughter · Ophelia
Polonius orders her to reject Hamlet, then uses her to spy on him. His death by Hamlet's hand drives her mad.
Polonius · father and son · Laertes
Polonius sends Laertes off with advice and then has him spied on in Paris. His killing brings Laertes home in arms for revenge.
Laertes · brother and sister · Ophelia
Laertes warns her against Hamlet in Act 1, grieves at her madness in Act 4, and leaps into her grave in Act 5.
Hamlet · foils and rivals · Laertes
Both are sons avenging murdered fathers. Laertes acts at once and lets Claudius use him; Hamlet sees his own cause in Laertes's, and they forgive each other as they die.
Claudius · manipulator and instrument · Laertes
Claudius calms Laertes's rebellion by redirecting his anger at Hamlet, then designs the poisoned match. Laertes, dying, names the King as the one to blame.
Hamlet · friends and fellow students · Horatio
Horatio is the one person Hamlet trusts completely, praised as a man not ruled by passion. Hamlet stops him from dying so that he can tell the story.
Hamlet · schoolfellows turned spies · Rosencrantz
Summoned by the King to find out what troubles Hamlet, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are seen through at once. Hamlet sends them to their deaths in England with a forged commission.
Hamlet · schoolfellows turned spies · Guildenstern
Guildenstern admits they were sent for and cannot play the recorder Hamlet offers him, which Hamlet turns into a rebuke for trying to play upon him.
Hamlet · mocker and target · Polonius
Hamlet ridicules Polonius under cover of madness and kills him by mistake through the arras, calling him a rash, intruding fool.
Hamlet · rival princes · Fortinbras
Fortinbras is the son who acts, first against Denmark and then against Poland. Hamlet gives him his dying voice, and Fortinbras inherits the throne.
Characters as described
Each portrait is drawn from the words of the text, not from a film or a stage production. The numbers on the picture point to those words.
Hamlet
Seems, madam! Nay, it is; I know not seems. ’Tis not alone my inky cloak1, good mother, Nor customary suits of solemn black2, Nor windy suspiration of forc’d breath, No, nor the fruitful river in the eye, Nor the dejected haviour of the visage3, Together with all forms, moods, shows of grief, That can denote me truly. These indeed seem, For they are actions that a man might play; But I have that within which passeth show4; These but the trappings and the suits of woe.
Act 1, Scene 2
Gertrude asks why his grief “seems” so particular, and Hamlet seizes on the word. Black clothes, sighs, tears and a downcast face are things an actor could put on; what he feels is inside and cannot be shown. In a play about acting and spying, he claims to be the one person not performing.
The play gives his black clothes and his bowed head. His dark hair to the jaw is how the panels draw him, so he is known at a glance. The fourth marker sits over his heart and points at nothing: the print, like the clothes, can only show the outside.
The Ghost
The words the numbers point to
1Armed at point exactly, cap-à-pie
2he wore his beaver up
3A countenance more in sorrow than in anger
4A sable silver'd
Act 1, Scene 2
Hamlet questions Horatio point by point: armed, the face, its look, its colour, the beard. Each answer makes the apparition more surely his father, and Hamlet resolves to watch that night himself.
Horatio says the face was very pale, so the print cuts all of him in paper, armour and all, and keeps red out of the plate. The beaver is the face-guard of the helmet, raised so that the face shows.
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Key passages for close reading
Claudius
The words the numbers point to
1his draughts of Rhenish
2smiling damned villain
3My crown, mine own ambition, and my queen
Act 1, Scene 4; Act 1, Scene 5; Act 3, Scene 3
The new King drinks and feasts while Hamlet mourns. After the Ghost speaks, Hamlet writes down that “one may smile, and smile, and be a villain”; Claudius himself, alone at prayer, names what he murdered for, and cannot give any of it up.
The play describes his drinking and his smile, not his face. His crown, short dark beard and furred gown are how the panels draw him. The crown is printed in red because it is the thing he confesses he killed for.
Gertrude
The words the numbers point to
1Like Niobe, all tears
2the flushing in her galled eyes
3Th’imperial jointress to this warlike state
Act 1, Scene 2
Claudius presents her to the court as a title, the widow through whom he holds the kingdom. Hamlet, alone, remembers her weeping at his father’s funeral and cannot forgive how quickly the tears dried. The play never lets us hear her own account.
The play gives her tears and her red, sore eyes, so the red marks the rims of her eyes and nothing else. Her veil, crown and gown are how the panels draw the Queen.
Ophelia
The words the numbers point to
1fantastically dressed with straws and flowers
2O rose of May!
3There’s rosemary, that’s for remembrance
4pansies, that’s for thoughts
Act 4, Scene 5
After her father’s death Ophelia’s mind gives way, and she hands out flowers whose meanings the court would know: rosemary for remembrance, pansies for thoughts. Laertes sees his sister’s youth destroyed and swears revenge.
The play gives her flowers, the straws and flowers in her hair and her brother’s grief for her youth, not her face. Her long loose hair, the band across it and her plain gown are how the panels draw her. Red marks the bloom Laertes mourns, as a flush on her cheek, and her flowers.
Polonius
The words the numbers point to
1old men have grey beards
2their faces are wrinkled
3Be you and I behind an arras then
Act 2, Scene 2
Hamlet mocks Polonius to his face, pretending to read a satire on old men. Polonius, sure he has found the cause of Hamlet’s madness, plans to hide behind the arras with the King and watch. He hides there twice, and the second time it costs him his life.
The play gives his age, his beard and his lined face, through Hamlet’s mockery. His bonnet and gown are how the panels draw him. He stands before the arras and is never drawn behind it.
Laertes
The words the numbers point to
1a very noble youth
2an absolute gentleman
3for your rapier most especially
Act 5, Scene 1; Act 5, Scene 2; Act 4, Scene 7
Everyone praises Laertes: the noble youth, the swordsman whose skill Hamlet envied, the perfect gentleman. Claudius uses that skill and that pride to turn a fencing match into a murder, and the praise is what makes the trap work.
The play praises him without describing his face. His short pointed beard, feathered cap and dress are how the panels draw him, so he can be told from Hamlet. The rapier stays in its scabbard.
Horatio
The words the numbers point to
1Thou art a scholar
2That no revenue hast, but thy good spirits To feed and clothe thee
3not passion’s slave
Act 1, Scene 1; Act 3, Scene 2
Horatio is a scholar and a sceptic, the one the soldiers bring to question the Ghost. Hamlet praises him because he is poor and so needs no flattery, and because he is ruled by judgement, not by passion: everything Hamlet fears he is not himself.
The play calls him a scholar and a poor man, and never describes his face. His square cap, white band and plain gown are how the panels draw him, and he is beardless, as a student.
Rosencrantz
The words the numbers point to
1gentle Rosencrantz
2my two schoolfellows
3There’s letters seal’d
Act 2, Scene 2; Act 3, Scene 4
The King and Queen thank “Rosencrantz and gentle Guildenstern”, then “Guildenstern and gentle Rosencrantz”, as if the two were one. Old schoolfellows turned the King’s spies, they carry his sealed letters to England without knowing they order Hamlet’s death.
The play never describes him and barely tells the two apart. His bonnet, bare chin and courtier’s dress are how the panels draw him. The red is the wax of the King’s seal.
Guildenstern
The words the numbers point to
1a kind of confession in your looks
2Will you play upon this pipe?
3these are the stops
Act 2, Scene 2; Act 3, Scene 2
Guildenstern cannot hide that the King sent for him, and cannot play the recorder Hamlet hands him. Hamlet makes the pipe his rebuke: “you would play upon me; you would seem to know my stops”, but he is harder to play than any pipe.
The play never describes his face. His round cap, short beard and courtier’s dress are how the panels draw him, to tell him from Rosencrantz. The recorder’s “stops” are its finger-holes.
Fortinbras
The words the numbers point to
1young Fortinbras, Of unimproved mettle, hot and full
2this army of such mass and charge
3a delicate and tender prince
Act 1, Scene 1; Act 4, Scene 4
Fortinbras is the son who acts. His father lost lands to old Hamlet; he raises an army to win them back, then turns it on Poland for a patch of ground. Hamlet, watching it pass, measures his own delay against him, and at the end gives him his dying voice.
The play describes his youth, his hot temper and his army, not his face. His circlet and breastplate are how the panels draw him. Red marks the heat in his cheek.
Hamlet's first soliloquy
Act 1, Scene 2
Where to find it: The first time Hamlet is alone, straight after Claudius and the court leave: from “O that this too too solid flesh would melt” to “But break, my heart, for I must hold my tongue.”, just before Horatio enters.
O that this too too solid flesh would melt1,
Thaw, and resolve itself into a dew!
Or that the Everlasting had not fix’d
His canon ’gainst self-slaughter2. O God! O God!
How weary, stale, flat, and unprofitable
Seem to me all the uses of this world!
Fie on’t! Oh fie! ’tis an unweeded garden3
That grows to seed; things rank and gross in nature
Possess it merely. That it should come to this!
But two months dead—nay, not so much, not two:
So excellent a king; that was to this
Hyperion to a satyr4; so loving to my mother,
That he might not beteem the winds of heaven
Visit her face too roughly. Heaven and earth!
Must I remember? Why, she would hang on him
As if increase of appetite had grown
By what it fed on; and yet, within a month6—
Let me not think on’t—Frailty, thy name is woman!5
A little month, or ere those shoes were old
With which she followed my poor father’s body
Like Niobe, all tears.—Why she, even she—
O God! A beast that wants discourse of reason
Would have mourn’d longer,—married with mine uncle,
My father’s brother; but no more like my father
Than I to Hercules. Within a month,
Ere yet the salt of most unrighteous tears
Had left the flushing in her galled eyes,
She married. O most wicked speed, to post
With such dexterity to incestuous sheets7!
It is not, nor it cannot come to good.
But break, my heart, for I must hold my tongue.
1“O that this too too solid flesh would melt” Hamlet's first wish is not for revenge, which he knows nothing of yet, but to dissolve, to stop existing. Check your own copy: this edition follows the Folio's “solid”, while the Second Quarto prints “sallied”, which many editors read as sullied, so in some editions the flesh is not heavy but stained.
2“His canon ’gainst self-slaughter” A canon is a church law. Only God's prohibition of suicide holds him back, which introduces the religious fear of what comes after death that returns in “To be, or not to be” and in the argument over Ophelia's burial in Act 5, Scene 1.
3“’tis an unweeded garden” The world, and by implication Denmark, becomes a neglected garden taken over by rank weeds. It is the first of the play's images of rot and disease, and it gains a sharper edge in Act 1, Scene 5, when the Ghost reveals that he was murdered while sleeping in his orchard.
4“Hyperion to a satyr” Hyperion is a Titan of Greek myth, the father of the sun and sometimes a name for the sun itself; a satyr is a lustful woodland creature, by Shakespeare’s time pictured as part man and part goat. The comparison makes the dead king divine and Claudius bestial, and shows how Hamlet thinks in extremes. An audience may wonder whether any real man could live up to the father Hamlet describes.
5“Frailty, thy name is woman!” The apostrophe turns his mother's remarriage into a verdict on all women, and the misogyny does not stay in soliloquy: it resurfaces in his treatment of Ophelia in Act 3, Scene 1. The line is personal grief hardening into a general contempt.
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The question: Explore the significance of this soliloquy in relation to Shakespeare's presentation of Hamlet's state of mind, in Act 1 and in the play as a whole.
The undiscover’d country, from whose bourn5
No traveller returns, puzzles the will,
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of?
Thus conscience does make cowards of us all6
,
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought7
,
And enterprises of great pith and moment,
With this regard their currents turn awry
And lose the name of action.8
1“To be, or not to be, that is the question” The antithesis is stark, but the question is left open: to be or not to be what, or to do what? One reading is that he is weighing suicide; another is that he is weighing action, since taking arms may mean certain death. The speech never uses the word I, so a private crisis becomes a question about everyone.
2“Or to take arms against a sea of troubles” The mixed metaphor is deliberate in effect, whatever its origin: no one can fight the sea with weapons. Resistance is pictured as heroic and hopeless at once, which is exactly how revenge against a king looks to Hamlet at this point.
3“ay, there’s the rub” A rub is a difficulty, and in the game of bowls an obstacle that knocks a bowl off its course. The image fits: his reasoning runs smoothly towards death as sleep, then is deflected by the thought of dreams, of what might follow.
4“this mortal coil” Coil here means noise, turmoil and bustle, not a spiral. To shuffle off this mortal coil is to get free of the troubled business of human life, and the phrase makes life sound like a heavy garment that could simply be shrugged away.
5“The undiscover’d country, from whose bourn” Death is a country with a boundary no traveller crosses back over. Yet the audience has seen a traveller return: the Ghost. Some readers take the line as a sign of Hamlet's renewed doubt about the Ghost, which he has just decided to test; others see it as the speech reaching past the plot to a universal fear.
6“Thus conscience does make cowards of us all” Conscience can mean moral scruple, and in Shakespeare's English it could also mean consciousness or thought. Both senses are alive here: knowing too much, and fearing judgement, turn potential heroes into cowards. It is Hamlet's own diagnosis of his delay, and the rest of the play tests it.
The question: Explore the significance of this soliloquy in relation to the presentation of thought and action in the play as a whole.
And that his soul may be as damn’d and black5
As hell, whereto it goes. My mother stays.
This physic but prolongs thy sickly days.
[Exit.]
The King rises and advances.
KING:
My words fly up, my thoughts remain below.6
Words without thoughts never to heaven go.
1“Now might I do it pat, now he is praying.” For the first time since the Mousetrap proved Claudius guilty, the King is alone and defenceless. The plain monosyllables and the repeated “now” give the line urgency, and an audience might expect the play to end here.
2“That would be scann’d” To scan is to examine closely, as a scholar examines a text. The second half of this line is where the speech turns: the student from Wittenberg stops to analyse, and the moment for action passes while he reasons.
3“this is hire and salary, not revenge” Revenge is imagined as a transaction that must balance, and his “audit” a few lines later continues the language of accounts. Killing Claudius at prayer would reward him rather than repay him, so Hamlet refuses a revenge that does not match the crime exactly.
4“He took my father grossly, full of bread” The father died with his sins upon him, as the Ghost complained in Act 1, Scene 5 (“Unhous’led, disappointed, unanel’d”), so he is suffering in fires. Hamlet wants Claudius's death to be at least as spiritually disastrous, which draws on Catholic ideas of the afterlife, such as Purgatory, that the Church of England had officially rejected.
5“And that his soul may be as damn’d and black” He wants not only death but damnation, which the Ghost never asked for. Some readers find this the most shocking speech in the play. It makes it hard to accept the view that Hamlet delays because he is too gentle; here his thinking produces a crueller revenge, not a kinder one.
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The question: Explore the significance of this extract in relation to the presentation of revenge in the play as a whole.
Poison poured into the ear
Example: The Ghost says Claudius “in the porches of my ears did pour / The leperous distilment”, and that “the whole ear of Denmark / Is by a forged process of my death / Rankly abus’d” (Act 1, Scene 5). Claudius later fears Laertes “wants not buzzers to infect his ear / With pestilent speeches of his father’s death” (Act 4, Scene 5).
Effect: The literal murder becomes a metaphor for the way words work in this court: lies, rumours and spying enter through the ear and corrupt the mind. The Mousetrap turns the weapon round, showing Claudius his own crime, with Lucianus pouring poison into a sleeper's ears, as a way of infecting his conscience.
The soliloquies, and their end
Hamlet speaks alone, or unheard, seven times: after the court leaves in Act 1, Scene 2; after the Ghost's exit in Act 1, Scene 5; after the players in Act 2, Scene 2; in “To be, or not to be” in Act 3, Scene 1; at the “witching time of night” in Act 3, Scene 2; over the praying King in Act 3, Scene 3; and on Fortinbras's army in Act 4, Scene 4. Then they stop. In Act 5 he talks to Horatio instead, and his language turns from self-questioning to trust in providence: “There’s a divinity that shapes our ends, / Rough-hew them how we will.” One reading sees a man who has found peace; another sees a man who has given up choosing, and waits for events to choose for him.
The play within the play
Theatre sits at the centre of the structure. The players arrive in Act 2, Scene 2, Hamlet gives them his advice on acting at the start of Act 3, Scene 2, and The Murder of Gonzago, which he renames The Mousetrap, is played close to the midpoint of the action. Its rhymed, old-fashioned verse (“Full thirty times hath Phoebus’ cart gone round”) sets it apart from the play around it. Hamlet introduces the murderer as “This is one Lucianus, nephew to the King.”, so the court sees a nephew killing a king: the performance accuses Claudius and threatens him in the same moment. Even the ending returns to theatre, as Horatio asks that the bodies be placed “High on a stage”.
Verse, prose and song
Most of the court speaks blank verse, unrhymed lines of ten syllables and five stresses. Hamlet uses verse for his soliloquies but slips into prose for his antic scenes, baiting Polonius and fencing with Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, so a change of form marks a change of mask. The gravediggers speak prose, and Ophelia's madness breaks into prose and snatches of song, her mind no longer held in verse. Rhyming couplets close scenes and seal decisions: “The play’s the thing / Wherein I’ll catch the conscience of the King.” ends Act 2, and Claudius's couplet about words without thoughts closes his failed prayer.
Hamlet absent: the shape of Act 4
After the Act 4, Scene 4 soliloquy Hamlet leaves the stage and does not return until the graveyard in Act 5, Scene 1. In his absence the play shows the consequences of the killing of Polonius: Ophelia's madness, Laertes's rebellion and Claudius's new plot. Hamlet's adventures at sea, including the pirate ship, happen offstage and reach the audience only through a letter (Act 4, Scene 6) and his own account (Act 5, Scene 2). The effect is that he returns changed and the audience has to piece together how, which makes the calm of Act 5 feel both earned and a little mysterious.
Opening and closing
The play begins at midnight on the battlements with a question, “Who’s there?”, asked by the man arriving to relieve the guard rather than by the guard himself, so from the first line nobody is sure who should be challenging whom. Francisco adds that he is “sick at heart”. The ending answers the question with a stranger: Fortinbras of Norway, to whom Hamlet gives “my dying voice”, takes the throne, and orders a soldier's funeral for a prince who spent the play thinking. Soldiers open the play and soldiers close it, with “Go, bid the soldiers shoot.”, and Denmark, which feared invasion in Act 1, is handed to its rival without a battle.
Wittenberg
The German university town where Hamlet and Horatio study, famous as the place where Martin Luther published his Ninety-five Theses in 1517, the start of the Protestant Reformation. Claudius refuses to let Hamlet go back there (Act 1, Scene 2).
Quietus
A release, and so death; also the final settling of a debt. Hamlet asks why anyone would endure life “When he himself might his quietus make / With a bare bodkin?” (Act 3, Scene 1).
Bodkin
A small dagger. In “To be, or not to be” a bare bodkin is an unsheathed blade.
Fardels
Bundles or burdens, the loads a person carries through a weary life, in “Who would these fardels bear” (Act 3, Scene 1).
Bourn
A boundary or limit. Death is the country “from whose bourn / No traveller returns” (Act 3, Scene 1).
Rub
A difficulty or obstacle; in the game of bowls, anything that knocks a bowl off its course. “ay, there’s the rub” marks the point where Hamlet's argument is deflected.
Mortal coil
Coil here is an old word for noise, turmoil and bustle, so the mortal coil is the troubled business of human life, not a spiral.
Conscience
Moral sense of right and wrong, and in older English also consciousness or thought. Both meanings sit inside “Thus conscience does make cowards of us all” (Act 3, Scene 1).
Hoist with his own petard
A petard was a small bomb used to blow open gates, so to be hoist with your own petard is to be blown up by your own device. Hamlet uses it in Act 3, Scene 4, of his resolve to turn back on Rosencrantz and Guildenstern the scheme they carry to England. The passage is in the Second Quarto only, so some editions leave it out.
Foil
A blunted fencing sword; a thin leaf of metal placed behind a jewel to make it shine; and, from that second sense, a character who sets off another by contrast. Hamlet's pun “I’ll be your foil, Laertes” (Act 5, Scene 2) plays on the sword and the jewel's setting: his lack of skill, he says, will make Laertes shine.
Unbated
Not blunted. Claudius plans that Laertes should choose “A sword unbated” for the fencing match (Act 4, Scene 7), and Laertes poisons its point.
Crowner
An old form of coroner. The gravediggers argue over whether the crowner was right to allow Ophelia a Christian burial (Act 5, Scene 1).
Argal
The Gravedigger's comic mangling of the Latin ergo, therefore, used in his mock-logical proof that Ophelia drowned herself on purpose (Act 5, Scene 1).
Maimed rites
A funeral cut short. Hamlet notices the reduced ceremony at Ophelia's burial, and the Priest explains that because “Her death was doubtful” she has been allowed only what the church permits.
Soliloquy
A speech in which a character alone on stage, or unheard, speaks their thoughts. Hamlet has seven, and none after Act 4, Scene 4.
Revenge tragedy
A kind of tragedy, influenced by the Roman playwright Seneca, built around a wrong and its avenging. Its conventions include a ghost, feigned madness, a play within the play and a bloody ending, and Hamlet uses all of them.
Metatheatre
Theatre that draws attention to itself as theatre, as in the Player's speech, Hamlet's advice to the actors and The Mousetrap.
Analyse the turn at “That would be scann’d”: the scholar stops to examine, and the moment for action passes inside a single line.
Show how revenge is imagined as an account that must balance: “hire and salary, not revenge”, and “how his audit stands”.
Link back to Act 1, Scene 5: the father died “Unhous’led, disappointed, unanel’d”, so Hamlet wants a death as spiritually disastrous. Bring in the context of Purgatory, a Catholic belief the Church of England had rejected, which Stephen Greenblatt explores in Hamlet in Purgatory (2001).
Judge how extreme the wish is. Wanting Claudius's soul “as damn’d and black / As hell” goes beyond anything the Ghost asked. Is this scruple, or a crueller kind of revenge? Take a view.
Use the closing couplet as dramatic irony: Hamlet's whole calculation rests on a false appearance, which ties the extract to the theme of appearance and reality.
Reach across the play: in the next scene Hamlet kills Polonius without thinking (“Is it the King?”), and in Act 4, Scene 7 Laertes says he would cut Hamlet's throat in church, with Claudius agreeing that “Revenge should have no bounds.” The contrast shows what kind of avenger Hamlet refuses to be.
Test a critical view, such as Coleridge's idea that Hamlet is disabled by too much reflection, against the scene, and conclude.
Every quotation is short, exact and embedded, and each is followed by what it shows: the illness image, the absent “I”, the language of accounts.
It sets two moments against each other, the soliloquy of Act 3, Scene 1 and the prayer scene of Act 3, Scene 3, which shows structure without retelling the plot.
It uses dramatic irony as a dramatic method, pointing to what the audience knows and Hamlet does not.
It tests a named critic against the evidence instead of borrowing his authority, and ends by reaching forward to the next scene, which is what lifts a competent paragraph to a strong one.
“within a month” The time keeps shrinking as he speaks: two months, then not two, then a month, then “A little month”. The dashes and broken-off clauses show a mind circling back to the same wound, unable to finish a thought, which is the soliloquy acting out his distress rather than describing it.
7“to incestuous sheets” Marriage to a dead brother's widow counted as incest under the rule in the Book of Leviticus, and the Ghost uses the same word of Claudius in Act 1, Scene 5. The image is also physical and sexual: Hamlet's disgust fixes on the marriage bed, as it does again in the closet scene.
8“But break, my heart, for I must hold my tongue.” The speech ends in enforced silence. The most talkative character in the play, who speaks nearly three times as many words as anyone else in it, cannot say any of this aloud at court, and the tension between what he thinks and what he may say is the tension the whole play runs on, until his last words, “The rest is silence.”
7“Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought” Resolution has a healthy, ruddy natural colour, and thought paints it over with a sick pallor. The image of illness links the speech to the play's disease imagery, but here the disease is inside the thinker rather than in the state.
8“And lose the name of action.” The long speech ends on the word the play keeps demanding. It then breaks off entirely when he sees Ophelia, so the soliloquy itself enacts what it describes: thought runs its course and no action follows.
“My words fly up, my thoughts remain below.” The couplet delivers the dramatic irony. Claudius could not pray, so the soul Hamlet feared to send to heaven was never in a state of grace. His whole reasoning rests on a false appearance, and the audience, which heard the failed prayer, knows it.
Weigh other explanations. He needs proof, because “The spirit that I have seen / May be the devil” (Act 2, Scene 2); he wants a theologically complete revenge (Act 3, Scene 3); A. C. Bradley, in Shakespearean Tragedy (1904), blamed a deep melancholy; psychoanalytic critics following Freud, such as Ernest Jones in Hamlet and Oedipus (1949), read the delay as Oedipal.
Use structure: the foils who act (Laertes, Fortinbras), the Player's Pyrrhus who pauses and then strikes, and the text's own measure of time, from two months to “twice two months”.
Consider T. S. Eliot's argument in Hamlet and His Problems (1919) that Hamlet's emotion exceeds anything in the plot to explain it, which moves the problem from the character to the play. Decide whether you agree.
End with Act 5: the soliloquies stop, Hamlet trusts that “The readiness is all.”, and the revenge happens only when Claudius's treachery is exposed in front of the court. Judge whether that ending rewards patience or simply lets events decide.
Her death is told, not shown. Gertrude's lyrical report in Act 4, Scene 7 presents an accident, while the gravediggers and the Priest (“Her death was doubtful”) argue over suicide, and two men fight in her grave.
Gertrude is judged by her husband's ghost and her son, but the text never says she knew of the murder, as Carolyn Heilbrun argued in a 1957 essay defending her. Use the closet scene (“Thou turn’st mine eyes into my very soul”) and her report of Hamlet as mad in Act 4, Scene 1, which can be read as keeping his secret, as he asked.
Look at her last choice. Claudius orders “Gertrude, do not drink.” and she replies “I will, my lord; I pray you pardon me.” Whether this is innocent, defiant or a deliberate sacrifice is left open, but her dying words warn her son.
Context: daughters were expected to obey fathers, and a queen's remarriage was a political act as well as a private one, which is why the court's approval of it matters in Act 1, Scene 2.
Conclude with a judgement: are the women silenced by the play, or does the play show them being silenced, and invite the audience to notice?
Analyse the advice to the players (“the mirror up to nature”) and The Mousetrap itself, including the detail that the murderer is the King's nephew.
Show that spying makes audiences of the characters: Claudius and Polonius “seeing unseen” in Act 3, Scene 1, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern acting friendship, and Polonius behind the arras.
Add theatrical context: Shakespeare almost certainly wrote the role for Richard Burbage, the leading tragic actor of his company, so the first audiences probably watched a famous actor playing a man who lectures actors.
End with the final scene's theatre: Hamlet addresses the “mutes or audience to this act”, and Horatio asks for the bodies to be placed “High on a stage” so that the story can be told. Conclude on what the play suggests about performance and truth.
Weave context into the analysis. The Ghost's Purgatory, a Catholic idea in a Protestant England, matters because it helps explain why Hamlet fears the Ghost may be a devil, and it shapes his reasoning when he spares the praying King.
Write about the play as theatre: the Ghost cries “under the stage”, Hamlet talks to “this fellow in the cellarage”, and a play is performed inside the play. Staging choices are evidence of meaning.