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KS3 · Year 8 - Development · Term 3 - Gothic and the Uncanny · Week 10
Pages: Structuring tension - pacing and withholding
Gothic stories build slowly, hint, then reveal late. Sentence length controls pace.
Lesson 1
What students do
Re-read Tell-Tale Heart climax.
Task
Mark sentence lengths; chart by paragraph.
Success criteria
Shows how short sentences cluster at climax.
Lesson 2
What students do
Discuss: why withhold information?
Task
Pair-talk on hints vs reveals.
Success criteria
Links delay to suspense.
Lesson 3
What students do
Model varying sentence length to control pace.
Task
Rewrite a paragraph: long sentences early, short later.
Success criteria
Visible shift in sentence rhythm.
Lesson 4
What students do
Workshop foreshadowing - plant a clue.
Task
Add one foreshadowing detail to your draft.
Success criteria
Clue planted; pays off later.
Lesson 5
What students do
Plot your story arc on a tension graph.
Task
Map opening → build → climax → reveal in 5 stages.
Success criteria
Plan complete with pacing notes.
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