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KS3 · Year 7 - Foundations · Term 1 - Autumn · Week 8
Pages: Chapters 8-9 + read Chapters 10-11 for homework
Both girls experience prejudice and loneliness differently - first comparative writing.
Homework
Read Chapters 10-11.
Lesson 1
What students do
Teacher models first extract; pairs echo-read key paragraphs alternating readers. Track how characters experience prejudice, misunderstanding, isolation.
Task
Where does Reema feel uncomfortable? What pressures does Caylin face? How are both girls isolated in different ways?
Success criteria
Can explain one way Caylin and Reema both experience loneliness using one quotation from each character.
Lesson 2
What students do
Groups compare quotations from Chapters 6-9; create comparison notes on loneliness and belonging.
Task
Stems: "Both girls experience…" / "This suggests…" / "A difference between them is…"
Success criteria
Can verbally compare Caylin and Reema using "Both girls…" and at least one quotation.
Lesson 3
What students do
Teacher models a writer-focused WHAT/HOW/WHY paragraph exploring how Williamson presents unfair judgement through character language and reactions. Students identify comparison language and embedded evidence.
Task
Model question: How are Caylin and Reema shown to feel lonely?
Success criteria
Understands how to compare two characters using evidence.
Lesson 4
What students do
Partially-scaffolded comparative paragraph with sentence starters and quotation bank.
Task
Guided comparative paragraph task.
Success criteria
Can compare both girls using quotations and explanation.
Lesson 5
What students do
Vocabulary retrieval. Students independently write one comparative analytical paragraph (Support level: MEDIUM).
Task
How are Caylin and Reema presented as lonely in Chapters 6-9?
Success criteria
Uses quotations from both characters and explains ideas clearly.
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