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KS3 · Year 8 - Development · Term 1 - Autumn · Week 2
Pages: Ch. 1, pp. 1-14
The monster arrives - Ness withholds information.
Lesson 1
What students do
Teacher reads pp. 1-8; class echo-reads "The monster showed up just after midnight. As they do." Annotate three places where Ness withholds information.
Task
Highlight one explicit detail and one implicit detail on a printed extract.
Success criteria
Can identify one explicit and one implicit detail and label each correctly.
Lesson 2
What students do
Read pp. 9-14. Discuss in pairs using stems: "I think Conor feels… because…" / "Building on that, I'd add…"
Task
Select two embedded quotations (max 5 words) about Conor's nightmare; one inference each.
Success criteria
Both quotations under 6 words and embedded; each carries a different inference.
Lesson 3
What students do
Watch teacher live-model a WHAT/HOW/WHY paragraph using "This suggests… because…".
Task
Copy the modelled paragraph and label W/H/W in margin.
Success criteria
Three colour-coded sections and one "This suggests… because…" stem present.
Lesson 4
What students do
Write a scaffolded paragraph on the monster's arrival using a sentence-starter frame.
Task
Paragraph (80-100 words) with one embedded quotation and "This suggests… because…".
Success criteria
Quote embedded; one inference developed with "because"; subject terminology used once.
Lesson 5
What students do
Independent paragraph (100-120 words, no scaffold).
Task
How does Ness make the monster seem frightening on pp. 1-14?
Success criteria
Embedded quote; "This suggests… because…" used accurately; full stops and capitals correct.
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